Author's Note on Public Space Analysis.
Ok, this is a definite first draft and will seem that way to any who read it. I really liked my introduction and the first three or four pages of it. I'm worried about the later pages though because I tried incorporating my notes to try and give a better feel of the space and I think I lost my 'voice.' Hopefully, it still flows smoothly as I tried to change up some of the stuff and insert transitioning information. I would really appreciate any advice and feedback on the last few pages. They just don't sound right to me, not that I really have an idea on what's 'right.'
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